Hi, this is my second layout. I tried to make this Journaling Challenge 28 Sep 2008
By and © Anna Aspnes 2008. I also used a brush from Ali Edwards and a date stamp from Katie Pertier.

Please would you give me comments on my layout, I'm trying to learn from it. And if possible, could you read the text, I'm not sure if it is all correct english.

Thanks for looking!